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anonfeedback ([personal profile] anonfeedback) wrote2012-01-23 05:13 pm

Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme


Inspired by The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme 2009




The Rules
1. If you are a writer, comment on this post with your username and/or a link to your fic journal. (e.g. [personal profile] anonfeedback @ [profile] anonfeedbackfics)
2. Commenters, no bashing/hating on the author's fics and/or personality, please. Writers, be prepared to take concrit.
3. Pimp out the meme by posting the code below.

Have fun!


People using LJ
Please use the code below.



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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 11:29 am (UTC)(link)
I love your writing! <3
I wish you'll write more KAT-TUN and Pin-RyoPin fics though :<
But you are superb, really, I'm just trying to blackmail fics here XD

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[personal profile] nacseo 2012-01-23 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
[personal profile] nacseo!

i'm trying to work on these things:
- having a better balance of introspection and plot movement
- not pushing in too much research (in au cases)
- cutting back on run-on sentences ;; my nemesis

but anything else i'd really appreciate hearing about!

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
your infinite fics are really interesting. i like the pacing of the narration and the simple language that you use, but i feel as if you can still cut on the introspection. when he was fixing the display in the window—well, anyway. it can throw off the reader a bit.

i hope that helped!

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[identity profile] hwanee.livejournal.com 2012-01-23 11:25 am (UTC)(link)
hwanee (at livejournal)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Love your fics a lot, your RyoPis are the best, the twin series is awesome^_^

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[personal profile] liliths_child 2012-01-23 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm [personal profile] liliths_child on LJ, and my fic journal is [profile] stoopidcrack.

I'm relatively new to writing. I've only written two proper fics, and the rest is ridiculous crack (hence the username). All comments are appreciated!
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[personal profile] paintasmile 2012-01-23 12:46 pm (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] paint_asmile. Fic journal is [livejournal.com profile] deluminous.

any comment would be appreciated(:

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 01:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I wish you'd write more long-fics, pwp is always nice but I really like your long stories, even if anon sucks at commenting.
And as there's no meme for it I love your fanarts too <3

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:10 pm (UTC)(link)
i love your style for the most part, but i think some of your descriptions can use a bit of... "vagueness", so to speak. you don't have to tell everyone about the detail of every single thing in a particular scene. it works sometimes, but most of the time it wears the reader out because of the excessive descriptions :( that said, though, i like your fics and i think you've got a lot of potential. don't stop writing :)

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:13 pm (UTC)(link)
You'll probably think I'm a gruppie or something (I suddenly wonder if gruppies can actually exist on LJ and such) but I really think you're one of the best authors out there, capable of writing meaningful stories and that you don't even give yourself the credit you deserve.

But that's just the opinion of this anon.

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[personal profile] higure 2012-01-23 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I´m sashjun @ LJ and my writtings are over at pillow_verse @ LJ

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
You are one of my favorite authors, and I love the way you write Ueda.

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Your writing is different from most I read and I feel like you can take any challenge and write any prompt easily. Not once I looked at the prompt you were given and thought that it sounds stupid and just can't be good but you proved me wrong every time. This is something that I really admire in authors.

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[personal profile] defeminized 2012-01-23 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
[personal profile] defeminized, try me. Fic list here @ lj.

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like your stories. They are usually quite short, but there's everything in it. You don't need tons of words to paint emotions all over the place. I can't really find something "wrong" in your writing

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
all i can think of is maybe you should invest in a beta for awkward wording/flow purposes? otherwise, there is nothing to perfect :* i like how your fic has atmosphere (for lack of a better word ;;) and the people in your fic are so realistic! nice work :D

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow, where to start... I didn't even liked Shirota before, but now I always hope that he'd at least appear in your fics (which happens XD).
You are a good author, and I think that you improved a lot with the time. Just please have more confident, underrating your work is not a good thing.

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i really like your writing, although i'm not into the fandom.

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] aiaikazu

Hmm, advices are always appreciated. ^^"

(Anonymous) 2012-03-13 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
I feel that i can easily imagine the world of your fics every time i read it. I think that's important and great!! :D

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you are definitely one of the better writers in all of your fandoms. Your Suju fic is best, however, your non-Suju fic seems to be quite lacking in characterization.

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[personal profile] lulumeow 2012-01-23 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] ___clash, or lulum26c on AO3. Not much to go by. But why not try?

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I'm so not anon now, but thank you for the last anon meme and I really hope to read and see more of your works! <3

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
i like your stories because they provide me a real taste of the man i fell for, jonghun :)

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[personal profile] tatoeba 2012-01-23 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
tatoeba @ simplyephemeral over at LJ. :)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
The akame fic inspired by White Xmas PV (forgot the title) is one of the greatest thing you have ever written. And that's a lot, considering almost all your fics are way above average in quality. There's not a word of crit in this one, but I promise I'll be more useful in the future.

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(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
:33 I love your fic! I think how much you love all the boys really show, and your commitment to be Ship Captain is impressive. I also think you're a lot more talented than you think you are, and need a little more confidence in your abilities. Sometimes I think your writing can get a little stuck, like it reads maybe you were struggling? But it doesn't detract from the overall enjoyment of your work and I think every author has the same problem.

:D

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Re: blahnicity

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
the way you write is honestly stunning. i think that you ought to have more self-confidence because you're very talented, your writing is gorgeous, and you handle emotions wonderfully.

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<*user name="chaeii" site="livejournal.com"> @ <*user name="disco_rodeo" site="livejournal.com">

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
oh wow, what a fail, i didn't see the * ;~;
[livejournal.com profile] chaeii @ [livejournal.com profile] disco_rodeo

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[personal profile] goodbyelover 2012-01-23 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] crazy_otaku911 @ [livejournal.com profile] pocky_addiction

Don't hold anything back!

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Honestly, your writing is BEAUTIFUL and I love your style very very much ♥

You don't write things out in details but instead, you leave it up to the reader's imagination. It's very interesting as it totally gives us a broader perspective to look from. If everything's a given, it's like, "I didn't like this THAT much cause xxx happened." But in your stories, you don't write out what happens :X Though this can be frustrating (cause I want to know what the author thinks sometimes!) >.< But then again, you probably wanted us to think (or something?) XD

I'm trying to find a 'bad' story you've written but there's nothing really! ^_^ I love reading your stories and it helps improve my English by A LOT! You're a great writer and I hope you keep on writing! ^_^

/is this getting too long? :x

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