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anonfeedback ([personal profile] anonfeedback) wrote2012-01-23 05:13 pm

Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

Inspired by The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme 2009

The Rules
1. If you are a writer, comment on this post with your username and/or a link to your fic journal. (e.g. [personal profile] anonfeedback @ [profile] anonfeedbackfics)
2. Commenters, no bashing/hating on the author's fics and/or personality, please. Writers, be prepared to take concrit.
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[personal profile] higure 2012-01-23 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I´m sashjun @ LJ and my writtings are over at pillow_verse @ LJ

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
You are one of my favorite authors, and I love the way you write Ueda.
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[personal profile] higure 2012-01-23 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm flatter. Also I'm happy you like "my" Ueda.

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I always love that you're consistent in your writing, a quality I really appreciate in writers. Keep up!
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[personal profile] higure 2012-01-23 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ I think I have a clue, but would it be too stupid to ask, what exactly do you think of when you say consistent. I mean. I'd like to expand on my good qualities? This sounds so wrong. Sorry.

Just thank you!

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Your writing is lovely. I've even liked fic where I didn't agree with your characterizations at all - in fact, I've read them knowing in advance that I wouldn't agree, because I knew you'd make them consistent enough for me to believe them within the context of the story. And you write such pretty words. That might have played a part in my wanting to read them, too.

I particularly like how you write awkward conversations - when your characters confront each other with the secrets they don't really want to spill! :) For some reason, you're really good at conveying the feelings of uneasiness and discomfort they're experiencing, so that their interactions read uncomfortable instead of forced. I think that's no easy feat, as a writer.
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[personal profile] higure 2012-01-23 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, now I'm curious about the characterization. Though maybe I should not ask because it might make the characters hard to write in the future and you just . . . can't make everyone happy. Still.

Anyway, thanks for having so much faith in me anyway ♥

Huh, maybe I'm just an awkward person ;D Still thank you for pointing that out! ♥

(Anonymous) 2012-01-23 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Just because I imagine them differently, it doesn't mean I'm right and you're wrong :) I think your characterisation is perfectly valid! I don't share it, but it's by no means a "flaw", in fact, I enjoyed the stories. A lot.