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The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

Inspired by The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme 2009



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1. If you are a writer, comment on this post with your username and/or a link to your fic journal. (e.g. anonfeedback @ anonfeedbackfics)
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

afxtown at thebellgoes

[(Anonymous)]

all i can think of is maybe you should invest in a beta for awkward wording/flow purposes? otherwise, there is nothing to perfect :* i like how your fic has atmosphere (for lack of a better word ;;) and the people in your fic are so realistic! nice work :D

[oatmeals]

thank you anon ♥ i'm definitely going to invest some time in searching for a beta in the near future! and that is really sweet of you to say ♥

[(Anonymous)]

i haven't read as much of your writing as i'd like to but i really love what i have read. although yes, your writing can be a little clunky, it's still really amazing. you set up a beautiful atmosphere and keep it consistent throughout a piece of writing, your characters are always really well written, and the "voice" you write in is always consistent. whether you find a beta or proofread more, i can't wait to see your writing in even half a year because you improve with everything you write. thank you :)

[oatmeals]

thank you for telling me this anon ♥ i'm definitely investing some time in searching for a beta and omg, thank you so much i really like to hear that i've improved because i've been trying to improve a lot over the past year (one year anniversary with fic writing coming up!) so whenever people tell me this i get all sorts of happy ;A; again, thank you anon and i'm happy that you enjoy my fics! ♥

[(Anonymous)]

i agree with what the other anons said about the atmosphere of your fic. it just somehow feels so... real? i'm not sure if that's the right word, but basically your fic always have a good feel to them. your characters are also not caricatures of themselves, and bonus because i like how you write a lot of idols and pairings that don't normally get a lot of love.

some of your phrasing does get a little clunky, and there is usually missed typos/grammatical errors, but i'm not so picky about that kind of thing esp since that can be easily fixed. besides, sometimes there is also some really beautiful phrasing in your work. :)

[oatmeals]

thank you anon ;~; ♥ i always try hard to make my fics real and have the characters seem like real people so to know what you like that makes me guuuhhhh ♥♥♥

thank you! i'm definitely going to look for a beta in the future and work on phrasing, also brush up on my english bc it def needs to be checked, lol. and beautiful phrasing gah anon i love you you flatter me thank you ♥