Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

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The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

Inspired by The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme 2009



The Rules
1. If you are a writer, comment on this post with your username and/or a link to your fic journal. (e.g. anonfeedback @ anonfeedbackfics)
2. Commenters, no bashing/hating on the author's fics and/or personality, please. Writers, be prepared to take concrit.
3. Pimp out the meme by posting the code below.

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<center><span style="text-transform:uppercase;font-family:cambria,georgia;font-size:13pt;">[ <a href="http://anonfeedback.dreamwidth.org/304.html"><b><font color="#47c2e7"><u>ANONYMOUS FIC/WRITING FEEDBACK MEME</u></font></b></a> ]</span><br><small><a href="">My Thread</a></small></center>

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

i adore your writing ok ;; it just hits hard for me (especially your b1a4ss the worldbuilding in that was fantastic and no scene really felt unwasted. let me claw at you forever apolcalyptic stuff is always difficult to handle but dear god your world. ahem anyway!)

admittedly |D i have not read your suju stuff! but i think all of your b1a4 stuff does a good job with expanding the characterisations beyond their preconceptions (e.g. chanshik as the cute adorable maknae, junghwan as the childish vocal) and fit it to whatever story you're telling, but it seems a bit more plot central than character central at times -- like an example would be shiver vs imperfections/what doesn't kill you, shiver was much more true to canonical interpretations (probably because it was in a canonical setting haha) where with imperfections/what doesn't kill you the characters were much more plot driven?

OTL I MAKE NO SENSE. ilu and your writing ok just gonna dance around you now. you should write b1a4 porn 8)

[yuzuru]

ANON ;n; you are so sweet omg thank you. that's reassuring because often i find myself underwhelmed by some apocalyptic stuff in fandom and i'm afraid mine is at about that level. (who knows it might be but i'm glad at least one person like it ahaha orz)

thank you again! i guess characterizaion is really subjective but i do try to make the main characters well-rounded; the side characters are the ones that are more just...there lol. sooo i'll attempt to flesh out the side characters intue future as well haha. i think the plot-central thing vs character-central thing comes into play depending on the fic; if it's au it tends to be more plot centered and vice versa but one day i'd like to achieve a balance orz

.........porn orz NOT SURE HOW WELL I CAN DO THAT but i will try

thank you anon! ;w;