Someone wrote in [personal profile] anonfeedback 2012-01-24 03:35 am (UTC)

i adore your writing ok ;; it just hits hard for me (especially your b1a4ss the worldbuilding in that was fantastic and no scene really felt unwasted. let me claw at you forever apolcalyptic stuff is always difficult to handle but dear god your world. ahem anyway!)

admittedly |D i have not read your suju stuff! but i think all of your b1a4 stuff does a good job with expanding the characterisations beyond their preconceptions (e.g. chanshik as the cute adorable maknae, junghwan as the childish vocal) and fit it to whatever story you're telling, but it seems a bit more plot central than character central at times -- like an example would be shiver vs imperfections/what doesn't kill you, shiver was much more true to canonical interpretations (probably because it was in a canonical setting haha) where with imperfections/what doesn't kill you the characters were much more plot driven?

OTL I MAKE NO SENSE. ilu and your writing ok just gonna dance around you now. you should write b1a4 porn 8)

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