i haven't read as much of your writing as i'd like to but i really love what i have read. although yes, your writing can be a little clunky, it's still really amazing. you set up a beautiful atmosphere and keep it consistent throughout a piece of writing, your characters are always really well written, and the "voice" you write in is always consistent. whether you find a beta or proofread more, i can't wait to see your writing in even half a year because you improve with everything you write. thank you :)