:33 I love your fic! I think how much you love all the boys really show, and your commitment to be Ship Captain is impressive. I also think you're a lot more talented than you think you are, and need a little more confidence in your abilities. Sometimes I think your writing can get a little stuck, like it reads maybe you were struggling? But it doesn't detract from the overall enjoyment of your work and I think every author has the same problem.

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