Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

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The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme

Inspired by The Anonymous Fic Feedback Meme 2009



The Rules
1. If you are a writer, comment on this post with your username and/or a link to your fic journal. (e.g. anonfeedback @ anonfeedbackfics)
2. Commenters, no bashing/hating on the author's fics and/or personality, please. Writers, be prepared to take concrit.
3. Pimp out the meme by posting the code below.

Have fun!


People using LJ
Please use the code below.
<user name="usernamehere" site="livejournal.com"> instead of the usual <lj user="usernamehere">


Pimp this out!
<center><span style="text-transform:uppercase;font-family:cambria,georgia;font-size:13pt;">[ <a href="http://anonfeedback.dreamwidth.org/304.html"><b><font color="#47c2e7"><u>ANONYMOUS FIC/WRITING FEEDBACK MEME</u></font></b></a> ]</span><br><small><a href="">My Thread</a></small></center>

Comments

[geared]

kantamu @ kakutei

[(Anonymous)]

i love your style for the most part, but i think some of your descriptions can use a bit of... "vagueness", so to speak. you don't have to tell everyone about the detail of every single thing in a particular scene. it works sometimes, but most of the time it wears the reader out because of the excessive descriptions :( that said, though, i like your fics and i think you've got a lot of potential. don't stop writing :)

[geared]

that's a very valid and concrete point, thank you! i'll definitely keep that in mind when i edit...things. it's something i try to cut down on but clearly i'm not cutting down on it enough /o\

and thank you, you're so sweet ♥